Dark Poetry #4 |
Drowning |
Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Do you enjoy my bitterness Relish my decay? Or does my soul disgust you? Would you turn your head away? Nothing hurts me deeper Is a crueler cross to bear Nothing worse than solitude Growing in this narrow air "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
I liked this piece. It was short and to the point, but packed a punch at the end. Well done! ~Alicia |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Seems sad to resolve to solitude. :'( Love, Terri~ |
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