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I need you in front of me
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I need you in front of me |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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I need you in front of me saying my name singing soft whispers into my ear leaving sweet traces of wine on my breath I need you in front of me caressing my deep cut wounds kissing away the scars that you left last time I need you in front of me now that my body only fuels on your touch wasting away as i wait for your return i close my eyes dreaming hopefully I need you in front of me holding me so tight i cant breath, and dont care take me by the hand and remind me of your passion trust me that i've never wanted you more than i do now I need you in front of me telling me everythings going to be all right sucking the selfish shadow through my trembling hands and releasing it for the days when I'm alone I need you in front of me no longer alive when you're gone a longing far beyond humanly possible I just need your mouth I need you in front of me kissing away the pain, reviving my spirit. LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
This really aches. I really feel it coming off the screen. Good job. |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
OMG This is one of the BEST poems i've read in these forums. Absoloutly fantastic Vote Kerry/Edwards |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
wow. i didn't think it was that good. I was kinda unsure about this one. Thanx heeps aye! LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pee in his/her pants - Brandon |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
This was very good....enjoyed it a lot. Tomer |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
i feel like this with bjorn every second loved it cant wait to catch up tomorro. im rather sick so ull hav to excuse my frequent nose blowing and coughing! hehehe well yes. i really liked this poem and felt it. if you dont mind me asking..... whos this about? darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Oh, that was really good. Oh man. That was good, my favourite part..... "kissing away the scars that you left last time" Can't wait to see u tomorrow. Hollow. Courts. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
dnt wry soph, about no one at all. i was just inspired to write it somehow... Thanx for all the feeedbak LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pee in his/her pants - Brandon |
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