The Eyes Truth - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #4

The Eyes Truth

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2004-07-04 03:32 AM

Leave the lights outside for hands to palm,
Redirect the walks from pits to canyons,
Living and skimming the shallow shadows.

Skies swim through maps,
Switching to an eternal bed,
Realizing tastes of wine among distant faces.

Masking in its basement,
Here lies the secret,
Of the eyes too fast to connect to the face.

Tedious mornings begin the chapter,
Treat the soul to repetition,
Yet release empty beyond reason.

Restless leaves chime through each window,
Casting with shades,
To each others pursuit.

To live with the apples fruit,
Sweetens the paths that are forgotten,
As feeling is the wallpaper to each new surrounding.

The skies may loom on the horizon,
Yet to sketch the wizadry of truth,
We must first embark on the illusion.

peaceful_dreamer
Member

since 2003-04-25

Posts 159
SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW

1 posted 2004-07-06 02:14 AM

You painted a really good picture for me. The last three lines were my favorite - you ended it very nicely. Well done.

"I'm just me, trapped in a body."

-peaceful_dreamer

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-07-09 07:28 PM

Of the eyes too fast to connect to the face.

I love this line. I think of this all the time. Good to see your writings around here.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.