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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
I took down those guarded walls of safety. Allowing myself to love you trust you allowing myself to feel. You promised you wouldn't hurt me. But here i am, looking up at you, and the shattered splintered remains of my broken heart are tucked tightly into your fist. Droplets of blood, from where the jagged edges have cut deep into your soft skin, are dripping back down onto me. You promised you wouldn't hurt me And i thought that you'd meant it. That you'd meant it. Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
and the shattered splintered remains of my broken heart are tucked tightly into your fist. brillant it was flowing really well, but then it ended. kinda wished it was longer. remember, IM HERE FOR YOU! and i'm sure he does still love you... tell the full story next time we talk. Laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Pretty cool. I liked it. You'll be alright vampiana, even if he steps out you still have yourself. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
you know im always here for you to vent too.... do the same back..... revenge is best served cold... atl least that is the best recipe i have ever tried before.... ne ways the poem is beautiful and the imagery in this is electrifing.... well done kurst... keep them coming.. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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