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Dark Poetry #4

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green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2004-12-26 01:44 AM

You're blind
You never see
Think and forget
A chasm of hazy cloudiness
And plasmic lightening

So much for you
Plans to take you
Make and reconstruct
A construction site in the air
Peace...

Why have you died
Where are you dead
What happens when they die
So much to gain
As little as you are

When the colors thrust out
Grab demensions in space
Become real
Thick and hard
And we're murderous goblins

Vacant souls
Drain
Found in fever
A mixture of brights
Its too bright to see

My guitar's name is Jennifer.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-12-29 01:44 AM

Had to read a few times, the words were so nice. Cringe, I had that word, the words were so proficient (thesaurus, lol).
"Water, water, water everywhere and every chance to sink."

Hollow.
Courtney.
(Lor, thank you for introducing me to five very talented young men!)

You just got to see me through another day
My body's achin' and my time is at hand
And I won't make it any other way

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2004-12-30 01:52 AM

Thank you I guess. lol.
What about five talented young men? Who?

-GIS

Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God.

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