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SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

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nc

0 posted 2004-06-29 12:17 PM

"Sorrow"

When you once brought me happiness...you leave me with sorrow and regret
I never should have fallen for you
i know I'm stupid, I mean I must be to think you and I could be
I should have seen it coming but now I can't help but love you
You've stolen my heart and my innonce
Strange thing sorrow hope here one day, gone tommorow
Love growing and then killed by the empty bitterness of sorrow
For always now I'll remaim wondering about tommorow
Why can't you love, me is the idea so crazy
You do not know what i go through, that I'm in pain daily and I love you

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-07-01 06:34 PM

wow. i can really feel all your emotions. Great job.
Just wondering...are you really going through this? If so...

~Alli~

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

2 posted 2004-07-01 10:51 PM

Alli:
I was going through this in 10-14-98. That's the day I wrote this poem.

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

CrEaTuRe
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since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

3 posted 2004-07-04 09:38 AM

Nice works I could feel the pain that flows thru ure poem.... Sorry for ure pain but keep writing it always makes everything better in due time...

*Hugs*

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

Sweetest Sorrow X
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since 2004-01-19

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From a cradle to a casket