Dark Poetry #4 |
Skeleton Fears |
River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Clouds plastered over playful agony somewhere deep within me scream echoes barely heard, cover silences violence beyond myself... even confusion blotted out floating on the surface of delusion my face - a story of myself my life's waste. stars bearing fruit of passion buried far behind my eyes looking beyond simple creation every battle ends and dies my face - history of armored agony a price of haste chaos ruined in sympathy a punishment fought to taste harbored skulls in my window tears crack through some dusty place obstacles recall shreds and follow my face - sold of honest obsession empty hard case sweet mercy and grace lacking wings of possession tattered yellow lace lost in time of direction my face my face clouded over plastered agony heart faint beats within scream let go barely heard over... silence. Running out of pain |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
I like this. Good structure and pace. Extraoridnary work here. well done. my face - sold of honest obsession empty hard case sweet mercy and grace lacking wings of possession tattered yellow lace lost in time of direction |
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