Dark Poetry #4 |
Years Go By |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Years go by And nothing has changed You are still a taker And you act like you're deranged. 'Me, me, me', is all I ever hear Your dreams, hopes and desires You tend them, you cater to them And you always stoke the fires. But what of the others around you? They too have dreams and hopes But they matter so little to you As the noose is tightened on the hangman's rope. Lazy, selfish sub existance You've gotta find something more to take But all too soon it'll come crashing down As the world realises you're a fake. But there amid the ashes of adversity A single light still glows The light of hope, faith and love Burns brighter than you'll ever know. And out of those ashes a phoenix will arise She will glow with triumphant joy Earning her place in the world's history While you cry and snivel like a little boy. The ascension has begun Stand back cos you can feel the power A power greater than you can even dream of And all know you will sit and glower. You're not the centre of attention Nor do you deserve to be A lazy dreamer of pipe dreams Is not the life for me. I will move up and beyond Beyond your comprehension And all the while you'll wonder why Your very existance is nothing but tension. Because Karma is alive and well And it watches you so closely And when it's your turn to scream in horror and pain You'll be alone and howling morosely. Isis is back! *~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Isis, So very glad to see your name and read your work, powerful feelings are in this piece and my favorite part is, "But there amid the ashes of adversity A single light still glows The light of hope, faith and love Burns brighter than you'll ever know." Love, Cerenity |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I agree with serenity. My favorite lines are: "Lazy, selfish sub existance You've gotta find something more to take But all too soon it'll come crashing down As the world realises you're a fake." Selfishness......... I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Dark Kisses Member
since 2001-06-24
Posts 364Flat lands of Kansas |
Welcome back Isis!!!! I am not here much, but it GREAT to *see* you again also. As for the poem... I know a few people like this also. Nicely written btw A friend, like a candle, is most needed in the darkness. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks everyone. Isis |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
A good strong empowering poem. I enjoyed this one very much. you have great talent. Hugs from June x |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
for some unknown reason, my posts have disappeared. i did post you a message to say how much I enjoyed this poe. It is very powerful Hugs June x |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
I love this Poem <3 Persephone |
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