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Excuse Me Dear, Now That You are Empty
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Excuse Me Dear, Now That You are Empty |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). 
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Excuse me dear, I entered your heart today… The only place that I ever wanted to stay. I wandered your hall and waited to hear your smooth voice call. I sat in the empty room of white and faded into the night. I washed my hands in your sink and wondered if you would miss me in pink I cried on your floor and for a moment thought, you stood there in the door. I lay in your bed and listed to your memory sway thru my head. I buried my soul in your sheets hoping you will find it there amongst your treats. I inhaled all the memories of you hoping you would return and paint the walls vibrant blue. I wore your favorite shirt and danced around barefoot in the dirt. I found a picture of your sweet face and left more tears in space. I waited for you for hours and everything I brought you wilted like wanting flowers. Excuse me dear, My only home was in your gravity, Could you tell me where to go now that you are empty? a-alibaster December 16, 2003 Until...ali {alibaster "the Queen of Darkness"} |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very intense thoughts |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I likes it... I likes it a lot. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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peaceful_dreamer Member
since 2003-04-25
Posts 159SoMeWhErE oVeR tHe RaInBoW |
It's not what I expected, but I like it. Great job! "I'm just me, trapped in a body." |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Well I greatly appriciate that you all enjoyed this...although now that I have gone back and read it again I realized that there are 2 aweful spelling errors in it ...LOL...I tried to edit but forgot to log in name so cant fix until tomarrow...I apologize. Thank you again. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
yes, i agree that the thoughts were very intense. Nice job, I really enjoyed reading your poem. Tahnks for sharing!  ~Alli~ |
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Sweetest Sorrow X Member
since 2004-01-19
Posts 146From a cradle to a casket |
Holy God..I loved it.. When i read the title I fell in love...and the actucal Poem was not at all disapointing. Thanks <3 Persephone You better count your lucky stars that everything I wish for..doesnt come true |
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