I loved you once but never twice..

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Dark Poetry #4

I loved you once but never twice..

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-18 04:41 PM

Maybe someday,

Some night,feeling soo depressed,
remembering the moments of the light.

I hate it when you come and the night begins,
Feelingsoo depressed of this feeling im getting every night,

Can it ever go away?
Can it ever leave?

I wanna sleep calm and relaxed,
I wanna sleep with no more you in life,

It really hurts to say i loved you then and i love you now,

But hey

what can i do?,i got everythinG and you are everything but it just leaves as thelight begins to disappear,

I have an image of you in my head , An image of light and sunshines just coming through the night,

Waking me up, telling me your here,
I even walk dreaming trying to reach the point of your touch.

But memorizes go and butterflies just begin to feel so nasty in the winter and spring,,

eVEn though i loved you once and i loved you twice BUT there will never be a next time...

Because my love to you will never disappear ...Not in a day or two....

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06

Posts 75
Boise Idaho

1 posted 2004-05-18 09:36 PM

very good i liked it alot...

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kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-05-18 11:58 PM

Dido... I erally loved this. I could feel ya.
kissa

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Defective
Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 73
Salisbury NC

3 posted 2004-05-19 12:59 PM

Nice

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-05-20 12:43 PM

Awesome, nice concept. Although I couldn't help but notice the title is "I loved you once, but never twice." and then in your poem it says "I loved you once and I loved you twice, BUT there will never be a next time." Umm...just a tad confused, but I liked it!

"Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian

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