Dark Poetry #4 |
A gift of hope |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Now life has shown me what it is made of, I can’ t fight and wish to live long, I dream not of a perfect life with lots of cash, Rather I fight on to what I believe is right, Through the struggles and the pain I know I will make it in the end, No happiness is more than I can get When I know I live a life of a good man, Please let me hang on to my faith and my soul, God help me mend this anger and stress, You are the one, who fulfills wishes and wants, Then let me lead a life without denial, At times I choose to give up this fight, Throw in the gloves and give up now, But there is something that sparks the flame, That makes me want to hang in for just one more day, So many have struggled and made it through in life, I want to be one of them, who makes it across, I’ll build my own bridge and supply my own rope, All I need you to do is watch over me and give me hope, No more tears I will shed and no more asking I will do, Just lead me into the divine light of truth and let me bathe, I am without guidance and without a road to follow, Maybe I will create my own path towards you and your home. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
your faith shines through in this |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
May ure path be made easy with the wishes from those who love ure work ;-) ViNa Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
this poem is very hopeful, nice write Beauty is truth, truth beauty |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey, good write...I have one question though...do you really think you can make your own way to heaven? not trying to pick an argument here, just wondering, because I believe in God too and....nevermind, lol. if you wanna talk about this, will you e-mail me? just some ideas here and there, if not that's cool too. again, good write. =) - River Running out of pain |
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