Dark Poetry #4 |
Story time |
Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
I can’t rest at night, Even when life is fine, And I can enjoy the test of time, I wonder often, Why I live this life, And why I want a wife, I just want to be alone, And just be able to breath, And no drama in the end, I lived on my own, I often wonder, can I grow, Old on my own? How often I thought, About killing myself, In the end I would end, Up hurting myself, This feeling grows old, But the pain remains strong, To this story I am sold. |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow....love it...its soo cute but the rhyming sounded kinda forced...but its gr88 lovez |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I agree, the rhyming did sound forced, but the poem itself was good. Nice write. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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