Dark Poetry #4 |
NEVER |
ShannonMarie Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55in a state of being |
I guess I will never know the answers to the questions in my mind I never hear my heartbeat beat with yours in time I'll never know how it feels with your breath upon my skin I'll never know just how it feels to let someone else in Never hear the words I have longed for you to say Never know the joy because now you've gone away Never share with you the things that lovers often do No hugs and kiss no nothing not even "I love you" Never did you say goodbye Never did you try Never will you show me but you taught me to cry Never should I morn for you for my heart you did break you showed me what love was not so it is you I thank love like you will never be hurt |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
oh hun, i've been there before...i heard a saying once that expresses this Perfectly..."Love hurts as bad as it feels good" ... so true, dont you think? God loves you hun, the RIGHT way. =) great write. =) luvin it! River Mae A river of change is rushing over me, through me. Forfeit to the waters, forget the past, live in the present. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
Shararose this is so poignant, it brings tears to my eyes but I know that you are strong. Hugs , Maggie |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Well Cusick I didn't write this, but I wish I had this talent to write like this. Thank you so much for the kind words, and for the hug as well. That was sweet of you. Shannon Marie, I hope things are better for you soon if this is a personal experience. Very sad write. Love, Terri~ |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
I wish I could have found a more appropriate venue for this comment, since it's completely irrelevant to the poem, but you didn't provide an email address or anything. I feel the compulsion to mention that my legal name is also Shannon Marie, although I've adopted Shay. Very interesting coincidence. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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ShannonMarie Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55in a state of being |
very cool that we have the same name... *hugs* if you want my e-mail it is hell_kitty23@hotmail.com.... thank you all for the kind words!! I will be writing more soon. Shannon Marie love like you will never be hurt |
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MIAK New Member
since 2003-10-13
Posts 4 |
Ahhh, I remember not to long ago I had those same feelings. Only good part about that kind of pain is the great poetry that follows. Good Job!! |
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ShannonMarie Member
since 2003-09-09
Posts 55in a state of being |
and in the end, I became the true winner.... |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
omg this is sad..... just hang in there......i love this poem |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
oh wow. I loved it. The rhyming.. everything, was amazing. I do think i will save this. If thats okay with you. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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