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Echoes of the Wind |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
I remember songs through the European tunnels, Womens blossom skirts mixing signals with the wind. There were times where night became day. Tight shadows walked on nimble toes. The store signs flickered, Triggered the radiance through Pictures of the sea, Through the streets of serenity. Falling through arms of quilt, With rythym dancing to the masses, Infinite smiles to the tiles below the seashore. Lean corners are familiar, Sweet turns with canvass on the walls, Bolding faces together, forever. A small town, Rarely closed, Always remembered by the sound of the wind. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Great imagery, heartfelt and poignant. I have saved it. It was great. Hollow "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Much of the reflection in this poem reminds me of Keats' "Ode on a Grecian Urn." Just the idea of time having been frozen in a still capture... yet you take a less optimistic glance at it.... Truly fantastic... it's good to see "dark" back in "dark poetry" again. I commend you. Brian "God becomes as we are that we may be as he is." ~William Blake |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I remember songs through the European tunnels, Womens blossom skirts mixing signals with the wind  amazing write |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tomer~ The title bid me come in for a read~ 'There were times where night became day. Tight shadows walked on nimble toes.' 'A small town, Rarely closed, Always remembered by the sound of the wind.' Wistful thoughts, so poignantly penned~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
hmmmm... I enjoyed this. Your writings always seem so descive and chrisp. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
o wow, the imagery in this was amazing! I could feel every word, it was just so.... i dunno. AMAZING!! ~lol~ I really like it... obwiously! I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Tomer Senior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168Michigan |
Thanks for all of the wondferful comments, always appreciated. Tomer |
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