Dark Poetry #4 |
I am no one |
Fariegirl Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 147 |
I am no one, I am nothing, I am just something with a name, A look, A sight, You will not see me in the light, You will not notice me in the dark, I am no one, If you walk in the moonlight, You will see the shadow of the thing called I, But if you face me, You will not see the thing of myself, I am no one, You will not see me at school or work, You will not notice me in an alley or bar, If you are in sight of anyone, I will see you, But you will not see the shadow of I, I am no one, This is who I shall always remain, A shadow, Something that just is, Something that doesn't truly exist, I am no one. ~*Faries exist.*~ |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
you get right to the point don't ya ...strong expression , good work fg -wolf |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Very strong emotion in this... *sometimes, it hurts less to be a no one.* Kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
wow, this is pretty good, i like it, couldn't have said it better myself. - River sleep my precious slumber |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
woooooooooooooooooww....truly gr88 keep it up.. p.,s rememeber we are all something...god made us to be something or are something ..just hang in there and you willl be someone and actually you are someone ,,your a poetrist..i love it keep it upploves |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
good job, i can emphasize with the loneliness for i have felt that way often that i am noone. Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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