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Before it is goodbye
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Before it is goodbye |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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This is my farewell before i lose you forever i want to thank you for every moment i spent with you the moments i spent dreaming of you every moment i wanted you by my side all those moments helped me pass the time when you weren't with me This is all i want to say before you move on to some other place i need to let you know i was always thinking of you always on the sideline cheering you on always hoping you'd look my way and notice i gave a damn your face kept me grounded every time i threatened to fall when you walked by avoiding my eye contact This is my last confession before i lose the will to speak to you again i think you always knew i loved you whenever i said hello to you in the mornings when i told you your eyes were so amazing i could swim in them forever whenever i shrugged away your smiles or gorgeous laugh all these times i almost felt like telling you when i thought you might admit in return Before it is goodbye let me say this one last thing and hope you remember this as the way i am You were always there in my heart No matter what you said And this hole where you left me Will heal in time And i'll go on and love another But you will always hold my respect and love, for being the way you are And never forget the girl in your block who always looked on in wonder Never forget i Loved you. (only few can understand this one. It was written sometime near the end of last year when i felt his way) The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near. But your still gone...and I'm still here |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
wow that was amazing.... honestly. am i right to assume that iots about a certain sum1 with the name starting with 'l'? dusnt really matter cause it is such a wiked and hardcore poem. i love it how its a long poem but u neva sorta think... ok this is just a waste of space... very line counted. wiked. going to london tnight, hopesfully will be able to get internet. missin ya. soph nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I really needed to read this... I can relate. Definetly. I started crying when i read this, and i have been crying all day, so am surprised that there are any tears left. I am saving this. I loved it. You are an amazing writer, and i love reading all of your poems. Thanx. This helped me more than you will ever know. amazing. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
silh ... i know what you mean , great poem it flows together great ...too bad its about such a sad topic later wolf |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
hey, I totally understand this. probably because I've been there myself. I like how you described it, good imagery...I'm just sorry that you had to go through it too. *hugs* - River sleep my precious slumber |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Lovie, I think I know who Soph is meaning, that special lovable person beginning with "L", tell us, is it HIM, HIM HIM HIM HIM? I really can understand, Really. I'm just peachy that everything thing is hunky dory.  Hollow, Hollow who knows "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian [This message has been edited by Hollow_Emptiness (04-15-2004 05:39 PM).] |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Sorry, i read this again... and it is jsut so amazing... I can relate to it in soo.. many ways. `kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
courtney? how dare you! u no it is not a HER it is a HIM and yes it does start with a loveable letter "L" cough cough ogan neways Thanx heeps kissa. your work is also brilliant. many of urs i also relate to LOR The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
OMG I'm so sorry, I musn't have put him, I'm sorry don't get me wrong lol. I didn't mean to put her, eeek.....I knew it was _ _ _ _ _, but for some reason I put her, actually now I'm afraid of myself........ Soz Lovie, Hollow. Hollow who apologizes and corrects her mistake "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wowwowowowowwowowo...its amazing i was tearing when i was reading it..i felt sooo sooo hard on myself....god ............. but i loved it im keeping this 1 keep it upppp....and i would love to hear from you moree plzz...lolol.. ::^love^:: |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
really enjoyed reading this, honestly |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is amazing, i feel the same in so many ways..... kinda freaky coz im going thru this right now (are you looking in on my life?????) just playin round... keep up the writing girl....... lovin it Mel so this is me but what do you care about that???? |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
Thank you all Yer those times were pretty sad and i always just wanted to run away. Now i'm going thru a similar stage but for different reasons. LOR "It would make those who listen to it doze into a land of rivers, kund fu and unicorns, eventually making the listener pe is his/her pants - Brandon B |
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