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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-04-08 10:38 PM

I'd like to think I'm perfect
But then I'd be lying to many people
Perfect is someone who is liked by heaps
Hated by most
Loved by few
Wanted by all
Perfect has a best friend
Best bunch of mates ever
Perfect has a boyfriend
Perfect is beautiful
Perfect gets anyone she wants
Perfect stays predictable all through her life
Until she meets the one
Then everything changes
She's not who she's always been
Shes different and unpredictable
Nothing as what you'd expect
She changes everyones opinons
Until
she's
perfect
no
more

The pain of losing you, is still wanting you near.

But your still gone...and I'm still here

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-04-08 11:07 PM

hmm... different. I like this. Very awesome write. I like to think i'm perfect, but then again, i lie a lot... ~lol~

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

2 posted 2004-04-10 12:49 PM

I liked this poem a lot... Keep up the good work..!

-I've written a poem as well (which I think is awfull, but what the hell, I just wrote what I felt) it's called : "Be Happy" in *teens poems*.

*Inque Monroe*
Junior Member

since 2003-10-18

Posts 43
No where special

3 posted 2004-04-10 06:02 PM

Silhouetted,

I love this poem, I know exaclt what thats like.

lovergurl
Member

since 2007-05-08

Posts 59
va

4 posted 2007-05-26 03:13 PM

i absolutely loved it!!!!!! AWESOME job.
keep them coming!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Becca.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

5 posted 2007-06-01 02:40 AM

3 years have been since you wrote this, and I still know what you mean.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

6 posted 2007-06-01 08:17 PM

I agree and i would hate to "perfect" (tho i would mind looking it,) i love being difrent but some times i would like to blend in.

To be perfect would be boring, to me

Thanks for the great poem

Abbeon

dwgpoet
Member

since 2007-03-05

Posts 122
FL, USA

7 posted 2007-06-01 08:25 PM

Your poem Exterminates
the existential,
perfectionist poet.

Thank You,
Reminds me that they
perfectionists say,
that we others are,
"born a hound (part 2)"

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

8 posted 2007-06-04 12:01 PM

I really enjoyed this poem! it is so true! you are a really talented poet!

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