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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
**ok, just fyi, this doesn't promote suicide, but it's about someone who struggles with the temptation and doesn't understand why anyone would care** I am so foolish why are you so kind? why didn't you run away while I was blind? my fate is out the door my courage spilled on the floor naive is where I'm at there is no second chance take a stand and walk away before someday ends today the pills the knife try to take over me again, again I try to make sense of this life even though sense never made life and life never made sense every time i wind up wanting to say - "Goodbye" because the the hand that's been delt can't be changed and somehow you are still here still the same why are you here? told you to go away slapped & talked back you're still on track I don't understand why? why do you stay by my side? why do you even try I'm useless always have been always will be and yet... you're still here beside a wretched horrible me. why. sleep my precious slumber |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
speachless... Click |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Good write "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
interesting...need to get back to you on this one "So what befalls the flawless? |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
because the the hand that's been delt can't be changed ahh yes it cant be changed but it can be altered my friend even the impossible |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
thanx guys...eor I'm looking forward to that  ...wolf, you're right, I never thought of that, I guess I was just in that despairing mood where everything seems...well, you know. - River sleep my precious slumber |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Hey River, interesting write. To filter ones souces as the truth prevails. We find that we are all like the Sun, full of warmth and light.. and like a seed, they are all the same to me. With endless blooming and new beginnings. That is why the next and new day is, always here. Our prelude to eternity. Thanks for the read. wayne If nothing is something |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
wow, you should make a poem out of that =) thanks. - River sleep my precious slumber |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86 |
speechless. |
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