Dark Poetry #4 |
Banished was his love... |
Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
He screamed from that dark blue corner as his ceiling fan tassels clanked against the glass He cried out to his God, a plea he'd never forget he said: "My God, My Lord, My Savior... shelter me from the icy embraces of false truths from mock innocence they so willingly bear from the hope that I shall one day find her I'm sick of searching, sick of waiting I'd rather die alone, than continue this struggle..." he wept in the corner of his room for he felt betrayed, everything inside of him felt akward and wrong, he'd shared his gift; his love with her without knowing the truth for hers was a gift often enjoyed and he wept wept for innocence lost, he learned the silent truth it's never worth the cost, never worth the cost the affection of others is never worth the cost so he silently condemned his love to the darkest corners the darkest corners of his heart and brought forth the arrogance and crudeness, the indifference and distance the four horsemen which guarded his bleeding love in his despair he whispered: "Let the ages cry the blackest tears tonight for a love is lost which can never be regained mine is banished henceforth to the abyss never to return, even unto pain of death let the stars glean one single ray of light and shine it down upon that love that it may always remember what it "should have been" to give itself let the deepest shadows of the fires of hell roast its tender body blistering the hope reminding it of what the bitter truth is..." as he stood the browns of his eyes dulled slightly, stagnating to a chalkier tone and then he went on prepared to challenge anyone who would dare the gauntlet of his heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow..that's intense |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
wow "So what befalls the flawless? |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
I'm crying with you on this. I feel exactly the same, I hope this is just fiction for you, but it's truth for me. I also believe in and follow God but sometimes life isn't fair is it? awesome write, couldn't have said it better myself. - River sleep my precious slumber |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I agree with ^^^! I couldnt have put it better myself. I am a girl, thats about the only difference with this poem, and how i feel. Very awesome. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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