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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
A gesture of hope reliquished by a memory down another rabit hole is my tendancy Digging in this flesh on mine to feel the symphony to indulged me in this hopeless sympathy to fall down in a hole to feel bored and to be alone to engage upon and let lose with my forbidden soul Digging through this to feel my apathy this perssitance grabs a hold of me Grappled like a fish surrendering to our pity My deviated serenity Reliquish all this again take it in and allow it to fill this hole grasp it and forgive me now Only tedium in this hole Just fly away in this fatigue of mine |
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Paragon Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 114 |
very interesting rhythm to this peice I enjoyed reading it, well done. Paragon. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
intrestinf write, but the second to last line didnt make sense to me... "So what befalls the flawless? |
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