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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
I am awakened in a blinding moment by electric veins flash flooding black sky fear finds a voice but the sound drowns inside rolling thunder my stricken nerves lie quivering among shattered pieces of reflex memory as day breaks and the gods begin to weep I hide my nakedness in the shadows of their tears "If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it." |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LOVE THIS!!! wow....  |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
this was awesome, coyote!! yes!! i feel this in my very lifeforce! i prefer the feeling of nakedness. it is the homelife of choice. my truest friends must do the same when they visit...lol. we sit indian style and talk for hours, unabashed by what is most beautiful. you are a genius/phenom writer. of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
OMG HOW COOOOOOOOOL IS THAT???? woah, now that was some great writing fantastic. love it laura you're the only one keeping me alive |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
*sigh* ahhhh now that was a very very very great poem loved it, you got some serious talent there. love and empathy sophie merry christmas nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for reading and for your kind and supportive comments my friends. The windowpane is crystaline and clear. Happy Holidays. CB 8) "If at first an idea is not absurd, there is no hope for it." |
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