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this feeling |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
theres something about this feeling that constantly reassures when it all starts falling into place I know it will end up right I have a feeling the day i knew you was the end of my torment i have a feeling this is it this is real maybe it's this feeling that sings my sadness away maybe it's this longing that drives me ever closer i don't know maybe it's just a feeling, but then again it doesn't have to be. sleep my precious slumber |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
I am glad you have that feeling. At some point i could've related to this a lot, but i cant anymore. Not right now atleast. Not today. I like this poem though. I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
yeah, i know what you mean. there was also a time when this write would have made me cry my eyes out because i didn't have it and i wanted it. but even now that i have it, it's still not exactly a walk in the park. oh well...count your blessings. sleep my precious slumber |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think we all can relate to this |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
simple... the tortures of attraction...the struggle good write. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
nice write "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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