Dark Poetry #4 |
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I'm still here |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand ![]() |
Screaming into the night feeling numb and locked up tight All i need is you right here The touch of your hand, the smell of your hair An aching hole of a missing heart it bleeds and breaks now we're apart All i know is how breath but anything else is beneath me But the pain of losing you Is still wanting you near But your still gone ...and i'm still here If you could step into my head, tell me would you still know me? |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
![]() "So what befalls the flawless? |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Awww.... that is soo... sweet!! ![]() |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Lovie its sad ![]() "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Very nice write. If I were in the mood to think, I'd tell you why. But, suffice to say, you did it right. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch... ![]() |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
i go thru that too often. im still here Vulgarity removed from signature - Ron |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
awwwwwww....*sniff* that's really sad, i know what it's like. i'm sorry if you've ever felt that way, it sux. great write, you expressed this feeling well. - River sleep my precious slumber |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
aww. it' so sad. I almost cried.great job. Becca. |
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