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meaningless ramblings of a lost mind
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meaningless ramblings of a lost mind |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Blood pounding out the tedius work heart pouring into my flesh into the endless night dark I don't really call myself anything but a wanderer feet grinding at the dirt light slipping into morning eyes convulse and hurt I must be a vampire though it doesn't really seem like i've become anything of the sort I work towards nothing just to work I do something just to do something flesh and bones seem not to matter as I continue with the nothing fight and run becomes the norm run to fight loses it's trend born to wander outside of conform long to linger inside of you breath my... next breath live my next day as if it where my last trying to... accomplish something though it is nothing because I need you. sleep my precious slumber |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BonnieSue~ I just feel so deeply the agony in this penning~ Emoting is good for the soul ... and wonderful to share~ Thank you for having done so~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
River! I love your work and this is just another awesome piece of yours, i'm adding it to my library....Please keep posting, your poems are some of my faves..... However long the night, the dawn will break. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Marge - oh thank you! you're so sweet...ya, poetry is kindove my way of venting, so a lot of it is either sad or angry...though i'm not like that all the time. *hugs bak* Hollow_Emptiness - wow, i didn't know i had any fans, lol =) that makes me so happy that you can enjoy it that much - I'm sure that you will find once you have been here for a while that just reading other peoples stuff helps a lot when writing your own. it did for me anyway. =). have a groovy day u guys! - River sleep my precious slumber [This message has been edited by River (03-05-2004 12:48 AM).] |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Deep. This is very amazing. I can really feel the hurt and agony. ~Vampire Kisses  I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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