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love and hate |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
I hate the ashen of your skin the nakedness of your chest I hate the sound of you heart beating rich within my ear I hate the fact your right and i am subtly wrong I hate the pain you do inflict upon my broken swollen heart I hate that you make my eyes blur and you make my pian slowly withdraw I hate you for what you made me and the way i feel inside but most of all i hate the fact that the word hate is always repalced with the word love |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
I hate that you make my eyes blur and you make my pain slowly withdraw I hate you for what you made me and the way i feel inside I loved this bit Bex is this with whom i suspect? Or is this with whom i do not know of? Or is this completely fictional? Call no man happy till he is dead. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
subtly can kill slowly...nice write "So what befalls the flawless? |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
woaaah powerful.... kinda comercial, yano the whole BUT MOST OF ALL I HATE THE FACT THAT I DONT HATE YOU, NOT A LITTLE BIT NOT EVEN A TINY BIT NOT AT ALL... yada yada yada. sumthin along those lines. it was good but the idea was a bit over-used if ya get me. i can understand u just needed to release ur emotions. yup You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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