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Dark Poetry #4

There's no time left

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2004-02-28 04:55 PM

Agony
rips through
my veins
drags me under
so I drown

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-02-28 05:04 PM

wow
this one is trully amazing.
you have such a talent

loved it!

keep rockin

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-02-28 07:36 PM

niice

really captured me in just that sentence

nice as

LOR

In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2004-03-01 10:00 PM

Thanks for your comments :-) I haven't really done poetry like this before, but I decided the other day that I was in the right mood to give it a shot. ^_^

Horses are my life
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

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