Dark Poetry #4 |
Darkness Consoling. |
kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
DARKNESS CONSOLING She lays there the darkness consoling her, The only sound to be heard, was her muffled sobs, and her silent pleas of death. The wind was howling, the dogs were growling, hearing her silent pleas. As she layed there, on the bitter, cold cement, the wind sending chills up her spine. Suddenly the sobbing stops, the hurt goes away, replaced with rage. The wind ceased, the dogs silenced. Darkness enveloping her, the clouds turned red, like the blood dripping from her pale skin. Thunder rolls. The wind awakens, as feirce as a raging fire. The dogs go mad, with a bark so deafening, it could wake the dead. They knew what was coming. ~Vampire Kisses I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
didnt u just do a poem like this? I think so... lol i cant remmebr!! LOR In the bible on angels have wings, and the rest must wait to be saved - Jewel |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Yes, but i had to re-post it, because i got deleted or something like that. ~Vampire Kisses I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Paper Tiger Member
since 2003-09-28
Posts 77 |
I thought I wrote dark material... We see much, observe little, and perceive less. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
ME AGAIN!!! yeah i noticed it got re-posted to. i really like this bit: The only sound to be heard, was her muffled sobs, and her silent pleas of death. very very dark and hehe almost SCARY!!!! keep rockin darkness You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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