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Dark Poetry #4

ironic

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

0 posted 2004-02-18 11:39 PM

ironic isn't it
stupid aint it?
funny how
these feelings
can easliy be turned off
and now i feel nothing
for you
i need not of ur attention
but now
heres the ironic part
you won't mine
your eyes look at me
and i look away
angered
you talk to me and i try to ignore
why now?
your attention is slackening
from hers
but i cant be
bothered
to care
so
ironic
so
funny
so
reality
so
life

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-02-18 11:47 PM

BEXUS IS THIS TRU?
OMFG IF IT IS

OOOO IM SOO PROUD U TURN UR BACK
DIGNITY BABY!!!

GO U HUN
LET HIM NO HUS IN CHARGE EVEN IF U DO GO BAK TO HIM

KEEP ON KEEPING ON

LOR

Silhouetted by Deception

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-02-19 10:41 PM

kool. I like this. It is funny how things are like that, a little pathetic too. ~lol~
Nice write. I love your poems.

~Vampire Kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-02-19 11:52 PM

I love the end, how it changes from irony to life. And the first to lines are really really, god i cant explain, its a powerful two lines, enough to make me want to read all of it. Your poems are great, keep posting.

I saw him steal the light away
     That haunted in her eye
It went so gently none could say
More than it was there one day
     And missing

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-02-20 01:42 AM

gasp

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

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