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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
i am dead i am broken i feel nothing no one feels anything for me he doesnt love me he doesnt care so i have ceased i disappear from this numbness through and through i wish he didnt love her but he does it doesnt matter i can begin to move on begin to heal begin to feel again but still rejection will linger but i have had these painful scars removed so why shud he be any different any more important simple answer hes not |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
OMG THIS IS MY FAV OF URS EVA BOOKMARKED FOR PAINFUL TIMES BEX U NEED TO WRITE MORE LIKE THIS AWESUM KEEP ROCXKING HARDCORE... YOU NO YOU DO!  DARKNESSYou can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
IT SCREAMS WAT I NO IT DOES OMFG BEXUS U LITTLE BEAUT AAAHH THIS POEM for some random reason REMINDED ME OF THE SONG....I HATE U SO MUCH RITE NOW, I HATE U SOME MUCH RITE NOW, I HATE U SO MUCH RITE NOW....AAAHHH soz little bit of a moment there... LOVED IT LOR Silhouetted by Deception |
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Vagabond Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163 |
much better then the one i just read. the one attacking Bush and the attack on Iraq Vagabon the Lost One |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
dnt be so judgemental vagabond its bad enuf u criticise chester in his topic, but agen in another, now thats just low. cmon and get over it. like i said worry about ur beliefs not his. Silhouetted by Deception |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
"i am dead i am broken i feel nothing no one feels anything for me he doesnt love me he doesnt care" I can relate. I love this. It is one of the best i have read so far. ~Vampire Kisses I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
THIS IS SUCH AN AWESOME ONE, IVE BOOKMARKED IT TOO! IT HAS TO BE MY FAV OF YOURS, SO INSPIRATIONAL. EVERYONE CAN RELATE TO IT, AND MY FAV LINE IS OBVIOUSLY THE LAST ONE "HE'S NOT" ITS SO BLOODY TRU GOTHIKA, P.S: If this is what ur going thru at the mo. Then keep reading your work. I saw him steal the light away |
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