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Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

0 posted 2004-02-12 01:08 AM

colour me blind
with the blackness of your heart
colour me blind
with the whiteness as we part
colour me blind
with the browness of you unrelenting eyes
colour me blind
with the blueness of your petride lyes
colour me blind
with the redness of my lips
colour me blind
with the ashen of my hips
colour me blind
with the purple of my life
colour me blind
with the silver of this knife

please just colour me blind
so i can't see what lies behind
when my love to you is black and white
i wish you were blind away from sight

and i pray
someday
i will retaliate
and soon i will annihailate

all feelings and emtions
and then i will be truly COLOUR BLIND

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

1 posted 2004-02-12 02:47 AM

wow. this is a truely "colour blind" poem, lol. i would say it's dark but i wonder if that's a colour? dark blue is but dark black isn't. hmm, oh well, anyway what i really mean to say is, great job!!! lol. gee that wasn't so hard...ok, I'm going to sleep now. i really need it =).

- River

"You are more than what you look like. You are more than where you've been. You are more than what they say about you. You are more...you are more than what we see"

[This message has been edited by River (02-12-2004 04:27 PM).]

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

2 posted 2004-02-12 07:28 PM

excellent. just simply great writing and skill.
I love all the twists this takes.
AWESOME.

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-02-12 10:38 PM

good... "shirt"

you just practice ewat you preach dude and youll be blind foreverr

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-02-12 10:52 PM

NIICE ONE BEXUS

eermm...wat she sed!

lol im loving ur poems 'lately' if u no wat i meen
this is really bringing ur emoton and talent out
LOR

Silhouetted by Deception

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