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the friend |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
your chestnut blue eyes reflect the sky my own grey blue, catches your eye your face lights up with a magical smile looking at you i could walk a mile but then you look at her my heart starts to stir she is gorgeous with tanned skin and flowing hair i try not to notice i try not to care you find ways to talk to her, and i am an outsider i try to catch your attention, but your the denyer and just when i slip, you look back at me and my heart calms with serenity i remember touching your hand, electricty your face softens with sensitivity all i ever want to do, is be loved by you to feel that warmth and subtlty Oh so true then you see her beautiful face my mind races a fast pace shes my friend i beg myself to remember the cold touches me like the winds of december and then i know you love the other my heart pleads for a cover a fakeness of happiness, so fake and then my heart begins to break and once again i'm alone just another love struck clone i slip away from sanity i pull away from gravity and then after so long there is a nothing |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Gothika, I love this poem, it is so true to life, but through descrptive words. I think its awesome. Hollow |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
AHHHH BEX!!! YOUVE MADE ME SO SAD! i know the true undertone ur sending here. you look so sad these days ever since he came along. yet i also know how your feeling. it hurts. this is a very good poem, yet I dont understand wat chestunut blue eyes are??? plzx tell! hehe keep rokin  darknessYou can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
lol same here soph!!! bex i understand hu ur talking about we have to do something this weeked whether we like it or not k i want to brighten up ur life and we can talk about MALES and how evil they r lol cyer soon LOR Silhouetted by Deception |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I really enjoy your style. "chestnut blue eyes"- awesome description. "and once again i'm alone just another love struck clone" I know! I hate that feeling, and you try to put it off, because you don't want to seem like all the rest. "my heart pleads for a cover a fakeness of happiness, so fake and then my heart begins to break" This its me right now. You did an excellent and unique job with this topic. Wow, keep posting. And good luck with this guy hun. ~Lex |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
HEY GUYS thnx heaps lexy u really did look and thInk about my poem and i thnk you deeply 4 that. i am happy 2 say things r goin betta wiv that special sum 1  THNX SOPH AND LAURA WHO TRHU ALL OF THE LOVE/SADNESS MO HVE BEEN WIV ME ALL THE WAY! BEX |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
AND OF CORSE 2 HOLLOW HU WAS THE FIRST 2 READ NAD REPLY 2 ME POEM! I LUV URS THNX HEAPS 4 ENJOYN MINE! BEX |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Wow, i really love this. I know EXACTLY, in almost every way how you feel. I was in love or atleast i thought i was in love with this guy, and he was in love with my best friend. It really hurt me and i was, and still am very depressed about it. I tried to act happy for them, but i wasnt at all. Not even close to it. What gets me even more about this poem is that, I liked him, he liked her, then she got a b/f and he started paying attention to me, then my friend and her boyfriend broke up, and he turned his back on me for her so fast it wasnt even funny, but then again why would it be. ~lol~ Anyways, I loved this poem. Very awesome. ~Vampire Kisses I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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