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Dark Poetry #4

Angel's Hair

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2004-02-07 05:11 PM

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But my hand finds something to grab

I laugh
The only thing my hand could find
Was the useless, flimsy, strand
Of angel's hair.

I stay a while
Resting
With my hand clasped around
That Angel Hair

But then I really needed it
I needed that support
And I craved to be held up

You were my last life line
My only Angel Hair

My one chance to save myself

And I was
left
with
Angel's Hair

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-02-09 10:36 PM

wtf
sorry i didnt understand that at all
it was all good cept for the angels hair part
like u shood explain wat the angels hair resembles
to me i thought it was something like ur lovers hold or something but yer
plez tell me wat u meant by it tho k

LUV LOR

Silhouetted by Deception

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

2 posted 2004-02-10 01:26 AM

hey dude, im just sayi9ng the angels hair is so weak, its so thin and fragile but its the last thing i can hold onto. it sorta says my last hope is a weak and fragile thing and it cant hold my weight. that kinda thing

thnx for replying neway

keep rokin

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

3 posted 2004-02-10 07:52 PM

hey darkness
i liked the write....
i can relate to having something so flimsy as an agels hair to hold onto....
its like how can something so thin hold me up for so long...... how can something that should have snapped so long ago still holding my weight????
its wierd but i know the feelings and you've put them perfectly
Mel

this is me.... like it or not....
its who i am!
i am woman hear me roar

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