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Dark Poetry #4

Jessica round two.

KuruShio
Member

since 2003-11-18

Posts 110

0 posted 2004-02-03 10:48 PM

Jessica.
For all my love,
For life, and death.
Only you, you my love,
May write my epitaph.
For I can no longer write of death,
While you are still alive.
For I can no longer say nothings left,
While you are by my side.
Sparkle for me a little while,
While you walk away.
Cry for me a little.
As I still weep for day.
Cry for me a little.
You who gave me reason.
Fill me with your purpose.
You who hold that power.
Absolute.
You who hold my hand.
Absolute.
You who hold my undying soul.
Absolutely.

nn
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 75

1 posted 2004-02-04 10:55 AM

Touching.Well done

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2004-02-05 12:58 PM

interesting

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-02-05 09:06 PM

i liked it A LOT

very very good writing
some lines really caught my attention

i really like ur work

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