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Dark Poetry #4

Cadaver Dogs

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

0 posted 2004-02-02 07:30 PM

Entangle my hair in the points
of a pentacle star - finger
spears
creeping thru the fog on a sheet
of ice,
flags waving,
chains run
to the sky leading cadaver dogs.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2004-02-02 08:55 PM

You're intense, m'friend.

I like intense.

I'll be looking for your name in the scroll more often.

Very much enjoyed.

Eromyna
Member

since 2002-11-29

Posts 306
Pheonix, AZ, USA

2 posted 2004-02-06 11:02 AM

I really don't get it. But I'm still fascinated by the imagery.

"I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation."

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-02-07 04:51 PM

I agree with eromyna.

very fascinating.... lots of imagery which is very good!

keep rokin

darkness

You can always hear a tear in Cobain's voice, the pain going on there is always visible through his lyrics - Marilon Manson

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-02-09 10:13 PM

yet agen i agree with darkness and the other person
i had no clue wat u were on about
but i still liked it becuz it mystified me and made me read it a few times
i like ur style but it may help if you set ur lines out so it is easier to understand
LOR

Silhouetted by Deception

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