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NightFall Member
since 2004-01-28
Posts 88The land known as England 
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Walking fast, dont look back The sky is dark, the nights pitch black Running, shouting, screaming Faster, louder, sharper In to my house, creeping like a mouse Your mouth is dry, your eyes are dark, I ask you why? Hmmmmmmm i dony really know what this one means. |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
"Hmmmmmmm i dony really know what this one means." i dont know if this is supposed to be part of the poem, but i dont think it is, if it is not, you shouldent include this like this. you opinion after the poem. first of all that is for the reader to figure out, and it just seems like you are trying to explain your work, which is never necessary. "So what befalls the flawless? |
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