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River Of Hate
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River Of Hate |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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I see eyes of fathomless grey, bigger and darker than time I see lips of bleeding pain, relentlessly throbbing from the absense of your sweet seduction I see aging hands, strangley misused and overdeveloped I see ominous lies, seething through the unveiled mask left on the greiving face I see a broken chest, no more lifting in the light of your burning presence I see a reflection, in this pool of black, unforgiving water I see a million options to turn back, give in to your ludicrous reason But I see the reflection of my fathomless eyes, my throbbing lips, my misused hands, my ominous lies, and my broken chest, falling. Falling deep into this River of Hate Silhouetted by Deception |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey oi i dunno this one just like totally reminds me of one u posted ages ago on serenities u used the aged hands and the ending was the same cept for da river of hate... im i right?  darknessPlease answer, I'm calling just to find out if you could be there for me when I crack - finger 11 |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
mate, it was the same one exactly just used it on this account cuz i couldnt be bothered re writing one lool lool luv yas LOR Silhouetted by Deception |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
Well-delivered twist. Too often, it is painfully obvious when someone is going to draw a metaphor to themselves, but I never saw this one coming. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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