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Dark Poetry #4

River of Hate

serenities_blood
Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 56
New Zealand

0 posted 2004-01-20 01:31 AM

I see eyes of fathomless grey, bigger and darker than time

I see lips of bleeding pain, relentlessly throbbing from the absense of your sweet seduction

I see aging hands, strangley misused and overdeveloped

I see ominous lies, seething through the unveiled mask left on the greiving face

I see a broken chest, no more lifting in the light of your burning presence

I see a reflection, in this pool of black, unforgiving water

I see a million options to turn back, give in to your ludicrous reason

But I see the reflection of my fathomless eyes, my throbbing lips, my misused hands, my ominous lies, and my broken chest, falling.

Falling deep into this River of Hate

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

serenities_blood
Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 56
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-01-20 02:19 AM

thanx iliana!
YOur email was soooo touching i am really flattered
I'll be looking throught your private library!!

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-01-20 02:24 AM

I meant what I said (however little) about this poem. Take care....jo

serenities_blood
Member

since 2003-12-21

Posts 56
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-01-20 02:25 AM

did u get my reply?

xoxLORxox

Who says a woman cannot serve?
It would be my pleasure

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

4 posted 2004-01-20 11:58 PM

omg
thyat was so hardcore dudette
im shocked

its so amazing
so painful, brutal and beautiful in a strange twisted/laura way.

love the ending and the bit bout the misused hands.... mmm

loin it dude

hardcore

catch u on the flipside

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