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darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

0 posted 2004-01-19 01:08 AM

I hate this
I hate enjoying the pain I feel
I hate lying
I hate being a hassle
I hate disguising depression as a passing thing
I hate hating what I have become

I geuss I hate me.

Reaching
His hand grabs mine
As he pulls me
From where I
Clung to my cliff of
Sanity

Helpless and hopeless
I fall backwards again
Back into my dark, deniable
Lagoon of depression
Once escaped, it is
Impossible to stay away
For the lagoon captivates all who are weak

Note: this was adjusted to fit the policys… email me if you want the original version

Gothika_07
Member

since 2004-01-15

Posts 61
new zealand

1 posted 2004-01-19 03:57 AM

HEY!!!!
thnx 4 readn me poem soph
WOT CAN I SAY AMAZING AS EVA...
UR POEMS R ALWAYS EXCELLENT MMMMMMM

AND SEND ME THE "ORIGINAL" VERSION K

xxgothikaxx

Masked Intruder

Moderator

Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

2 posted 2004-01-19 05:01 AM

I still enjoyed it this way. Though, I will admit it does lose a little with the edit. But, rules are rules are rules. Thanks for understanding.

-*-*-

Immortality is my illusion.

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

3 posted 2004-01-19 03:49 PM

Well written poem.

My favorite part:

"Reaching
His hand grabs mine
As he pulls me
From where I
Clung to my cliff of
Sanity"

Vagabond
Member

since 2004-01-23

Posts 163

4 posted 2004-01-23 04:10 PM

Will you send me the full version(original)
e-mail [email protected]

Vagabon the Lost One

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

5 posted 2004-02-10 07:44 PM

hey darkness nice write
i would love the full version
email me at [email protected]

this is me.... like it or not....
its who i am!
i am woman hear me roar

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

6 posted 2004-02-11 01:25 AM

Heyaz Soph!
Oooh i love this particular poem, i love the cliff of sanity part.
Plz plz plz plz plz send me the original one! u know my email, tell me at school if u dont.

Laterz,
Hollow

I linger in the shadows, I breathe when I see you.

Jelfling
Junior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 21
Indiana

7 posted 2004-02-16 02:32 PM

hey, e-mail me a copy of the original, will you? [email protected]

Paper Tiger
Member

since 2003-09-28

Posts 77

8 posted 2004-02-18 03:09 PM

Simple, yet extremely deep. Both beautiful and dark.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

9 posted 2004-02-19 09:56 PM

I love it, it is so... I dunno how to put it, Dark and beautiful i guess, like
^^^ said. I would like to see the original, email me at [email protected]

~Vampire kisses

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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