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It was me... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Wow devina this is amazing!!! I love how you rhyme the lines but are able to keep the rhythm flowing! and yet you still have to take a moment to think about what is really written hardcore stuff! be proud of this one rock on darkness |
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Gothika_07 Member
since 2004-01-15
Posts 61new zealand |
THIS WAS ABSOLUTELY ASTONISHING!!!!!!! I REALLY REALLY REALLY LOVD IT! KEEP ON DOIN WOT UR DOIN xxgothikaxx |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Wow! This was amazing poetry. So easy to feel and see. Great imagery and rhyme. I want to take out some of the lines to tell you what especially grabbed me, but I'd end up copying the whole poem. Each line was amazing. Wonderful poem through and through. Loved it. |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
i've often seen these people, these squares at the table, short stacked and long odds against; all their outs gone, one last card in the deck that can help them... i used to wonder how they let themselves get into such bad shape... and how the hell they thought they could turn it around." you made me think of that line. nice to see you still posting, devina. (this is midnightson, if you remember me at all...). the first four lines... what a hook. well done. it's not that the future is near or far... |
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