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Dark Poetry #4
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angele
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since 2004-01-09
Posts 35
Malta (tiny island in the Med)
0 posted 2004-01-11 07:07 PM


Leaking gas in a locked room
Mocking, laughing,
Delighting in seeing me trapped.

The dooming, deafening clang
Of brass church bells
Engulfs the surroundings.

Soft and slippery
With a sharp, hard core.
Now - freed of my shackles,
Despair drags me down more.
© Copyright 2004 Angele Spiteri Paris - All Rights Reserved
xmutexelationx
Junior Member
since 2003-05-16
Posts 15
AmongstTheCharredFieldsOfSnow
1 posted 2004-01-12 04:48 PM

This is an awsome poem, I really like your style too. I hope to read more of your work

<3
Vagabond
Member
since 2004-01-23
Posts 163
2 posted 2004-01-27 12:17 PM

traped, forever trap within yourself. like me

Vagabon the Lost One
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