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Dark Poetry #4

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sudoken
New Member

since 2004-01-09

Posts 2
the divied states of whatever

0 posted 2004-01-09 12:08 PM

Well this is my first presentation on this site.I thank all of you who read this I hope you enjoy it.

hatred
Anger in the dark
ppl killing otheres
senceless violence at a park
where kids r tormented and hated
love lost in the lgiht
knowing it wont conume
fighting to get outa this room
the room called insantity to get back
in the room called sane
that where ive never been
wishing sne1 woul tear mw limb from
limb seeing ur eyes
seeing a toutchered girl
wondering why
why is it how
for in the end we are all angery
dont u agree with me now?

Well there it is.And if you would like www.sudokenpro.cjb.net this is my poetry site which is visted by publishers if you wold like to go aybe you will get published.

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2004-01-09 04:57 PM

there are numerous typos in the piece...so many I lost count. prehaps I shall re-visit at a latter date

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