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Tainted Love |
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tainted_love123 Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 11Australia |
Low Theres a pain that only I can feel, That haunts me through the day, A torture that becomes so real, I just want to run away. Death seems the only end, And for this pain I’ve cried, You can’t even turn to a friend, You can only run and hide. But when you hide it finds you, You can't hide from despair, But you can drop hints and clues, For loved ones to know your there. It’s the burning flame inside you, But deep within you know, You’re the only one to blame, For taking you so low. By Loretta |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
tis a powerful write |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Well first I'd like to welcome you to Passions. Second i'd like to say that this was truly a good poem. And I am sorry for Loretta, may her days be better than the poem implies. I only know myself...and even that I don't know well. |
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xaos Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 35 |
Sad, and I think most of us have had moments like these at some time in life. Nice piece. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Loretta~ This is deep with angst ... and I'd like to welcome you to Passions~ Hope you enjoy getting to know us all ... well, maybe not 'all' of us ... but lots of us anyhow~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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tainted_love123 Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 11Australia |
Yer thankz guys, this is just one of my many poems about my life. I'll post more later. I can't wait to get to know you guys it feels good to talk to people who have the same interest in poetry as i do. It's such an easy way to express ourselves. Love Loretta |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
true,,,,no matter how deep you try to hide inside yourself,,you're found,,,,,good write,,,welcome to pashions Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
Nice read! You are not alone by any means. Shereen. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
hey loretta wow your poem really touched me i geuss im in that same situation trying to hide etc etc really good to read welcome darkness neva be alone... let darkness and shadows become your friend |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I very much enjoyed this write. It has some very powerful thoughts, and it was written very nicely. Check you e-mail for a special suprise. Cause in my dreams it's always there |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Tainted Love, well suits you, after such a powerful emotionally felt poem, welcome and look forward to more. |
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angele Junior Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 35Malta (tiny island in the Med) |
Gripping and powerful...you managed to capture feelings I'm sure most of us have experienced at some point in our lives. |
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sudoken New Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 2the divied states of whatever |
wow...amazing...its better then amazing i find words hard to find it's that good.Basically i guess i could just say that its godly that is how good it is..or mayb godessly...hrmm not sure its in that contxt. -wood fist- |
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