Dark Poetry #4 |
Prisoner |
Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
Anticipation fills my soul Palms begin to sweat My head starts to spin My stomach nauseous I sit quietly My eyes pacing across the empty wall The things I could do The person I could be The life I could live But know inside That it will never be For I am a prisoner Of fear We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
||
© Copyright 2004 Ryan Kruse - All Rights Reserved | |||
tainted_love123 Junior Member
since 2004-01-03
Posts 11Australia |
fear.. an interesting emotion. good poem |
||
Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
Fear wears many hats for me and it holds a lot of us prisoners of our own control. Sometimes a safety net as well. Very good read. I like the perspective. Shereen. |
||
Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
the way you put the feelings of being trapped by fear,,,,awsum Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
||
Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
You all are too kind We spend our whole lives trying to live, only to realize that we don’t know what life is truly about until it is too late. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |