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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Hello all. This is my first poem here. I hope you all enjoy!!! The light, caressing the tree lines above. Twilight from a far, the translucent rays, Travel by night, never the day My loneliness unfaithful, I am floating now, Drifting one could say. What is maturity without age? What is ignorance without awareness? I can hear the thunder over head, to soar in the sky, To soar and be free. My journey won’t last, A new beginning is near. My heart broken urges to be whole once more. Why doesn’t anyone see me? Why isn’t anyone aware? Invisible, inaccessible to all that dare. This is my path and alone I must bare. The rain dies silently, the lights fade away. I can see the finish line, but I am unaware. Unable to visualize, unable to care. The cold sets in, the fire is gone. A single tear on a lovers face. My old visions diminish the grace. There is no recourse, no turning back. High above the sky, beyond the birds I lie. A place for whispers, a place to die... |
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prize Member
since 2008-11-21
Posts 116 |
really breathtaking - I enjoyed your poem and your style - thank you and hope to read more...P |
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pyre Member
since 2008-05-16
Posts 136 |
very good on your first write. welcome to pip. -pyre Does she pray, or am I prey? |
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angelfacegurl Member
since 2008-04-17
Posts 67Swartz Creek, MI |
kudos welcome to pip and hope to read more! |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
like ur style. midnightdreamer |
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