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prize
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0 posted 2008-12-19 01:21 PM


Emotions come quickly
Circling around grey matter,
Like racecars whipping on path
Revolving together, closely.
Emotions lose their path
Just as racecars often do,
Bombarding, fighting together
Slamming against the skull.
The brain hurts, just as the man
suffers in the car lost of control.
The feelings run wildly rampant
Inside the fragile shell of thoughts-
Persisting fight continues as emotions collide.

Take away these emotions
With another scar of self harm.
Emotions pour down - lie heavy on heart,
Like a grand boulder sitting in the
Desert, secure in its position,
Pressing down forcefully on dusty earth.
The feelings can be displaced
With a slice, a slam, a burn-
Emotions are released - transformed into
Throbbing physical pain, pleasingly visible
As the brain has suddenly forgotten,
And the racecars stop for a moment,
Just for a moment in time before emotions return.



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