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Dark Poetry #4
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what_hope?
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since 2008-12-10
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0 posted 2008-12-12 11:44 PM

take it all away i want to run and play get  away and just taske it day by day but the world dosent want me to  
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wolfy09
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1 posted 2009-05-11 12:25 PM

i think it would look better if it werent all on one line. other than  that i really liked reading i think it has a big meaning for a small poem
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