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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut

0 posted 2008-12-08 07:04 PM



"your life is a mess!" he screams at me
"it's all tangled up!" he screams at me
"i love u" he tells me later.
i cannot forgive you
i cannot say i love you
i cant stand to be near u
but if i must i will

the first chance i get
i'll leave and never go back to that wicked man
i'll show him
i'll be stronge and fight
i'll show you all!
ill conquer the world if i must
ill do anything
but i will NEVER forgive you
ill stay now but the chance to escape i'll take it
i wont forget what you said


my dear father.


She past you, but doesn't notice you.
Drained from emotion
she waits till death grasps her.
She faces it with no fear but rather welcomes it.

© Copyright 2008 Mariah Paige - All Rights Reserved
angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI
1 posted 2008-12-18 10:38 AM


this had great meaning and alot of strong feelings

*kudos*
bri


Kitherion
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since 2006-08-01
Posts 181
Johannesburg
2 posted 2008-12-19 02:11 AM


Dreamer,

Wow. I can relate fully to this. Amazing work.

Hugs and Kisses

"Our Father who art in Heaven... Hallowed be thy name..."

prize
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since 2008-11-21
Posts 116

3 posted 2008-12-19 12:33 PM


Wow, this IS powerful.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

P

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