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Dark Poetry #4

Sea Of Tears

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-12-05 12:59 PM

Reasons why

Feelings demanding

Bleed and cry

For understanding

Seeing whispers

Screaming thoughts

Blackness enters

Krimson drops

Drowning inside

Rage and fear

Stranded to die

In my Sea of Tears...
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c2008 vduna

The Esoteric Being
Junior Member

since 2008-07-22

Posts 34
MA, USA

1 posted 2008-12-05 01:54 AM

I can feel the emotion expressed well, nice work

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2008-12-05 10:41 AM

I do so like dark poetry and this was no exception.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

prize
Member

since 2008-11-21

Posts 116

3 posted 2008-12-05 05:51 PM

Inspired-8,

So well written with lots of feeling in so few words...terrific!

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