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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto

0 posted 2008-12-05 12:59 PM



Reasons why

Feelings demanding

Bleed and cry

For understanding



Seeing whispers

Screaming thoughts

Blackness enters

Krimson drops



Drowning inside

Rage and fear

Stranded to die

In my Sea of Tears...
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The Esoteric Being
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since 2008-07-22
Posts 34
MA, USA
1 posted 2008-12-05 01:54 AM


I can feel the emotion expressed well, nice work
Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
2 posted 2008-12-05 10:41 AM


I do so like dark poetry and this was no exception.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

prize
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since 2008-11-21
Posts 116

3 posted 2008-12-05 05:51 PM


Inspired-8,

So well written with lots of feeling in so few words...terrific!

P

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