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Dark Poetry #4

Comes the Dark

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-11-10 05:17 AM

When dark falls

All is still

Deathly pause

Overtakes ones' will

Blinds the soul

Drowns the heart

Nothing consoles

Comes fall of dark

Inspired-8

[This message has been edited by Inspired-8 (11-10-2008 09:20 AM).]

wolfy09
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since 2008-06-10

Posts 93

1 posted 2008-11-21 03:59 PM

omg thats just amazing i love it the images and emotion its amazing

LoneWolf
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since 2001-03-10

Posts 384
IL

2 posted 2008-12-01 12:07 PM

Wow! what else can I say is that this is just Great!

It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that.

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

3 posted 2008-12-01 03:32 AM

thank you for reading!!!

Pantheress
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since 2008-11-02

Posts 215
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2008-12-01 06:31 AM

Hi,
another great poem,smiles..
Thanks for sahring..

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