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NormalitxButterfly Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 107 |
captivated by the moon looking lonely your unending stream of tears told me something that the end should be like this its so sad I silence your name Because you don't Want to hear it now crying out for the night We won't need words if we can seek the night together. this day is the last one gracefully falling away into sky a dream afraid of waking you and me as all the dreams drift into sleep together Let's watch that blue-colored sky seeking the night going forth into a darkness with no place to step i found it was endless The night is cold fluttering down The streets become graves never the same again mired in the counterfeit dream the sound of loneliness quietly spreading can you hear it standing alone who knew we'd come so close |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"I silence your name" Now that's a nice line. It implies reverence and worship--like the Holy Unspeakable Name of G-d. I have no idea what the title should be though. I just popped in to say I love that line.  |
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axi Junior Member
since 2008-11-16
Posts 43NewYork |
counterfeit dream is an awesome title for this |
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